Thursday, 27 December 2012

Loneliness Francesca

As lonely as an immigrant
missing their own country

As lonely as a dead body
alone in its tomb

As lonely as a face
with no freckles

As lonely as a homework
that's not been marked

As lonely as planet Pluto
waiting for a visit

As lonely as a diary
who secrets are not revealed

As lonely as an orphan
with no parents to love

2 comments:

  1. Very powerful images Francesca - well done. I like th efact youproduce a long listand then selected the best ones an dyou also tried to improve on some of th elines. Well done.

    Mr Newell

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  2. nice,cute and sweet i love it ! by vivi

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