Wednesday, 19 December 2012

Francesca's poem


Hi, my name is Francesca and I'm learning about poetry. This week we worked on creating poems. The best poems I wrote is the car one. I worked with Ilaria and because I liked it so much I memorized all.

"I cherish my car,
 I'm the queen of the road,
 It brings me where 
 I want to go.

 I'm gliding in my luxurious car,
 While losers are stuck outside
 Under the pouring rain
 Full of pain.

 I'm free in my car
 I don't have a boring person 
 That gives me orders
 I'm free to do whatever.

 Walking is slow and old-style
 Instead my car is a rocket
 Broom, broom, broom
 And I'm gone."

I hope you like it and let me know what you think.  


2 comments:

  1. Well done Francesca- a fantastic poem ! If you can remember your whole poem off by heart, you must have put a lot of thought into it when you were writing it.

    Mr Newell

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  2. you know it all by art this is amassing !by vivi

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