Monday, 7 January 2013

my  smugly car by vivi

this is my car poem and it talks about
how cars can be such a negative thing

My smugly car

Cars pollute the world 
The cars are damaging
Cars are weapons  
better be watchful

Cars produce CO 2 
This means global warming
ice ice melting 
wa wa  water rising 

People in cars
think they are in their own  world
they feel like kings 
the small ones are ugly

The cars are extremely expensive 
They waste money for the filthy fuel
They misspending money for nothing 
They waste money for polluting the planet 

So now do you understand ?
The future depends on you                                     by vivi
You need to treat
the planet like a baby

1 comment:

  1. great poem Vivi. A really strong message and some good use of language. Well done.

    Mr Newell

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