my smugly car by vivi
this is my car poem and it talks about
how cars can be such a negative thing
My smugly car
Cars pollute the world
The cars are damaging
Cars are weapons
better be watchful
Cars produce CO 2
This means global warming
ice ice melting
wa wa water rising
People in cars
think they are in their own world
they feel like kings
the small ones are ugly
The cars are extremely expensive
They waste money for the filthy fuel
They misspending money for nothing
They waste money for polluting the planet
So now do you understand ?
The future depends on you by vivi
You need to treat
the planet like a baby
great poem Vivi. A really strong message and some good use of language. Well done.
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