Good stuff Hunter - you sound like a pretty amzing kid ! Lucky Ewan to have such a brother ! Some nice images and lots of fun alliteration. Not sure the last line is the best- person is a very boring word- I think boy would be better.
Good stuff Hunter - you sound like a pretty amzing kid ! Lucky Ewan to have such a brother ! Some nice images and lots of fun alliteration. Not sure the last line is the best- person is a very boring word- I think boy would be better.
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